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| Just getting started | Hi me again... heres another song i wrote... feedback appreciated ![]() I am so messed up right now, I don’t know what’s going on, It happened ever since I met you, I don’t know what going on My head is so messed up, It’s in a world of its own I don’t look at you like I did Look what you’ve done to me! Things are happening I don’t know about, I look at you and I think new things, Of hate, love and disappear. I don’t know what’s going on, My head is so messed up, It’s in a world of its own I don’t look at you like I did Look what you’ve done to me! I can’t take anymore of this, I have to get out as soon as I can, I don’t know if I love you, or I hate you All I know is you’ve got this charm over me My head is so messed up, It’s in a world of its own I don’t look at you like I did Look what you’ve done to me! Last edited by rstar500 : 06-01-2007 at 04:06 AM. Reason: put intro in the wrong pplace :P |
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| Doom-sayer, new to the faith Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: USA
Posts: 461
| What's the melodie like? Other wise sound good to me |
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Well, it seems that foreboding has fallen over the calm world that I call home. ZS forums and I are now best buds. (I think that zombies have less cred than nukes as a doomsday, but slightly more than aliens...)
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