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Old 06-01-2007   #1 (permalink)
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Hi me again... heres another song i wrote... feedback appreciated

I am so messed up right now,
I don’t know what’s going on,
It happened ever since I met you,
I don’t know what going on

My head is so messed up,
It’s in a world of its own
I don’t look at you like I did
Look what you’ve done to me!

Things are happening I don’t know about,
I look at you and I think new things,
Of hate, love and disappear.
I don’t know what’s going on,


My head is so messed up,
It’s in a world of its own
I don’t look at you like I did
Look what you’ve done to me!

I can’t take anymore of this,
I have to get out as soon as I can,
I don’t know if I love you, or I hate you
All I know is you’ve got this charm over me

My head is so messed up,
It’s in a world of its own
I don’t look at you like I did
Look what you’ve done to me!

Last edited by rstar500 : 06-01-2007 at 04:06 AM. Reason: put intro in the wrong pplace :P
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Old 06-01-2007   #2 (permalink)
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Default Re: Look what you’ve done to me

What's the melodie like?

Other wise sound good to me
Well, it seems that foreboding has fallen over the calm world that I call home. ZS forums and I are now best buds. (I think that zombies have less cred than nukes as a doomsday, but slightly more than aliens...)
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i didnt make one... buh thanx
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