Hi guys i just joined... umm heres a sample of what i wrote feedback please:

There was a time in my life
Were I was happy, everything was going fine
Then you came into my life
And thought I couldn't be happier.

But Ever Since You Came In My Life
I’ve Had Misery, Heartache and Failure
And My Hearts Had Enough, because
I Wish You Never Came In My Life

Now there’s nothing left for me,
I’ve seen people come, I’ve seen people go
But you've stuck around,
And I wonder if this endless torture will ever stop

Because, Ever Since You Came In My Life
I’ve Had Misery, Heartache and Failure
And My Hearts Had Enough, because
I Wish You Never Came In My Life

I don't know if I hate you,
Or if I love you, all I know
Is if I continue like this
I’m gonna explode!

Because, You Came In My Life
I’ve Had Misery, Heartache and Failure
And My Hearts Had Enough, because
I Wish You Never Came In My Life