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07-19-2006
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| Eligible for a custom title Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Dallas, Texas
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 |  Some of my poetry here one of my poems i would love some feed back so tell me what you think So Easy wake up put on my happy face a mask get dressed and catch the bus so easy or so it seems the teasing and taunting i'm numb by now call me stupid call me fat its not far from the truth anyway see all the happy faces... the real ones with authentic smiles impossiable for me. catch the bus home walk up the driveway pull out my keys unlock the door to my house and secret life so easy or so it seems the hitting and the hurt i'm numb by now beat and neglect me tell me i'm worthless dosen't matter by now anyway 'cause i know how to make it go away pull out my razor lock myself in the bathroom pull up my sleeve and close my eyes so easy and it is the cutting and the slicing it's the only way i can still feel slit my wrists make my ankle bleed it dosen't really hurt anyway its just a routine as common as lacing my shoes just not excpected put on a band-aid clean myself up prepare for bed and another day of lies so easy... |
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07-20-2006
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| i tried i always try to get my work published but they always say come back when you've matured a little than maybe we can market you. well anywho thank you i'm gonna post another one since you guys liked thi one so much |
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07-21-2006
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| Words "sticks and stones may break my bones, but words will never hurt me" bullshit words hurt more that bricks or sticks words are there forever they tear at you eat you inside and out it makes you want to scream and it makes you want to shout the scars they cause are visiable but not in your apperance. the scars they cause are worse thatn that they make you feel inferior then sometime down the lie when you think your doing just fine you find a trigger that causes you to remember all the horriable things from your life then your crisis gets bigger as you reach for a knife its the only way you know to deal with the pain you'll be happy again once you open a vein and as you lie on the floor bleeding once more you see the scars on your wrist that only exsist because of words thatb supposivly don't hurt. okay guys so what do you guys think of this one and be as honest as you want, if you think it sucks then tell me i'm here to learn how to get better at writing and i will take all the constructive critisim as i can get!!!! thank you to the people that take time to read and comment i really appretiate it!!!! |
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07-22-2006
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07-23-2006
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| Crimson Tears I see crimson everywhere a life-draining creature destroying bing its sole purpose hurting being its sole pleasure at first it was just a release now i relize its me as i begin to measure 6...7...8.... 9 drops 9 tears 9 glisenting, monsterous, glorious, painful, gainful beautiful crimson tears slowly slipping world tipping away life-ruiner self-abuser so many names i can relate now chosen, no longer chosser a choice was mine but given up given away like a bride on her wedding day like its something to parade but its not because i'm an addict i'm dead to my drug my pain is my pleasure my only option is pain in this case and since when is only one option a choice? like expecting a chours, but hearing one voice one solitary sad voice playing over and over in my head screaming "what happened?" what once lived, now is dead they say a picture is worth a thousand words and as i stare at my fleshy canvas and hold my metal brush i can't help but think "what will i paint today?" |
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01-14-2007
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| Those were amazing loved them you must be a natural poet huh? |
| Paige"Ellie hun, I thought vampires can't go out in the Sun." Manny"Did you just throw a drumstick at my head?" Ellie"You could feel through all that hairspray, amazing! Emma"I'm all fun, infact if fun were people i'd be China." Liberty"When we dicided to use the king size condem, the one that fell off. I'm pregnat!" Hazel"Paige, if you said no, thats rape." Ashley"I think shes crushing on you to Romeo, she practicly told me so." | |
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but other than that, keep up the awesome work!
