A poem that i wrote..

lil_carpenter · 07-06-2006

"you gave me"

You gave me pain and a feeling that hurt.you gave me everything except what i'm worth.you gave me stares, and you gave me glares. But thats nothing compared to what i wanted. you gave me a good morning but never a good night. you gave me a look that never seemed right..you gave me what you thought was best. but the thing is you never gave me the rest. you gave me a rush but never a ever lasting feeling. you gave me hope but in the end it just became a big fat nope. you gave me almost everything except the one thing i truly wanted. you gave me looks,rushes, and stares but the only thing i ever wanted was someone who cares.

Ellie_Nash · 08-09-2006

Whoa Wow I have to Say ya have some Serious Talent right there keep it up Hun (habbit)

07-06-2006	#1 (permalink)
lil_carpenter Eligible for a custom title Join Date: Jun 2006 Posts: 898	A poem that i wrote.. "you gave me" You gave me pain and a feeling that hurt.you gave me everything except what i'm worth.you gave me stares, and you gave me glares. But thats nothing compared to what i wanted. you gave me a good morning but never a good night. you gave me a look that never seemed right..you gave me what you thought was best. but the thing is you never gave me the rest. you gave me a rush but never a ever lasting feeling. you gave me hope but in the end it just became a big fat nope. you gave me almost everything except the one thing i truly wanted. you gave me looks,rushes, and stares but the only thing i ever wanted was someone who cares.

08-09-2006	#2 (permalink)
Ellie_Nash Commentator Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: OH Posts: 39	Whoa Wow I have to Say ya have some Serious Talent right there keep it up Hun (habbit)
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