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Old 05-24-2006   #1 (permalink)
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Default a poem or two...

These are probably not my best work, but i'm bored today, so i'll post some others later.

as you drift
off to sleep
i wish you
everything
i wish you peace
love
freedom
and assurance
that you are safe,
that i will
protect you
love you
and inspire you
to be great
to reach for the stars
and embrace them
to let the
whole world
be amazed
at how
special you are

sleep peacefully,
my precious baby
for tomorrow
is waiting for you

and another...

“I wonder why”
She screamed
As the world fell apart

As her loved ones
Disappeared
As her dreams
Were ruined

“I wonder why”
She thought
As she fell
Further and further
Down

Away from everything
Surrounded by dark
And in the eternal silence
She prayed

“I wonder why
I can’t go back
And live my life
To the fullest.
I wonder why
My tears were always
Unheard
I wonder why
No matter
How much I scream
No one
Knows of my pain.”

As she sobbed alone
The world came back to place
They all forgot her
They never knew her pain

“I wonder why,”
She whispered
Using her last breath
“Everything got better
when I finally left.”
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i forgot this one...

'Crying Inside'

She stepped outside
And icy winter air filled her lungs
The tears that had been falling
Froze on her cheeks
And faded away
But the tears inside kept falling

Same as always

Every morning
She put on her brave face
And stepped outside
To face the same pain

With every step and breath
Her heart sighed

Same as always

All they saw
Was her hard exterior
The costume she put on
To hide her pain

They never knew
How much she cared
How much their words hurt her
How much she regretted

They never saw why
She never talked
She only cried

It never stopped

They couldn't see why
She was always

Crying inside
I love you...
Is that ok?
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Old 06-03-2006   #2 (permalink)
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very nice and powerfull poems hotstuf.
I like them
Hope you continue posting peoms
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I write peoms too sometimes, but i don't think i will be publishing them.
For english class we had to write a report about aborution and i wrote a poem about that too.

I think poems and music are a great way to express oneself.

I think one day i post that one.. to get your opinion
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Old 06-04-2006   #3 (permalink)
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Thanks, that's really nice.
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You should post yours.
I love you...
Is that ok?
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Old 06-05-2006   #4 (permalink)
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OH okay, here we go.


The view of the one inside

Crying, crawling, footsteps, talking
Feeling the need to love that is all I ask.
Why mom did you take my life away?
When the only thing I wanted was to be in your arms
and fee all the love.
Explore the world and be someone important.
so i can make your proud.
This is no longer possible and it's all your fault.
All because you took the wrong turn
you didn't want me and i'm deeply hurt.
I didn't ask to be born, but still you gave me hope.
I wish you could see me cry,
Maybe than you wouldn't let me die.
Please mommy reconciliate.
I'm your creation.
The one that god made.
Why don't you want me to go outside?
Was it me or an other guy?
Mommy, mommy please, i'm begging.
I won't be in your way,
I just want to feel your sweet embrace.
You can give me away, if your don't want me near.
But please, give me the opportunity to learn.
I am not asking for much
But take in mind.....
that your killing your very own child.
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Old 06-20-2006   #5 (permalink)
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wow!! u have some powerful poems going on there..
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Old 06-21-2006   #6 (permalink)
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I like those. A lot. You should publish.
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I love the one that Spice posted.
I love you...
Is that ok?
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I love the one that Spice posted.

Thank you so much... i ussually keep my peoms and thoughts to myself.
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Wow...I'm speechless...that is absolutely fantastic!
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Old 07-07-2006   #10 (permalink)
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yes, i agree with everyone. SO great!
post some more ^.^
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