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Old 03-01-2006   #1 (permalink)
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Default Depression is who I am..

When I wake up in the morning
I just can’t help but cry
Because it really hurts to know
That inside I want to die
This life I thought I had
Has fallen before my eyes
And the only way to hide it
Is to cover it up with lies
It seems I'm always crying
And crying is all I do
And all this makes me question
If i'll ever make it through
I thought I had it all
But the truth is I was wrong
And each day it gets harder
To continue being strong
My smiles looking fake
And my eyes are showing tears
And all I guess this shows
Is that I have so many fears
I’ve tried to make this right
I’ve done my very best
But it doesn’t even matter
For in the end I am depressed
Depression is what I am
And who I am inside
And even thought I’ve tried
From depression I cannot hide...


AND DON'T LET *ANYONE* EVER
MAKE YOU FEEL LIKE YOU DON'T
DESERVE WHAT YOU WANT
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Old 04-23-2006   #2 (permalink)
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thats are good poem. its sad though its kinda hard to write a depressing poem with rhyme so good work
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Old 04-24-2006   #3 (permalink)
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wow Nice Poem I don't Ryhme I write Free Verse Poetry and have since like 10th grade I'll post others but Nice work keep it up.


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Old 05-14-2006   #4 (permalink)
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Nice Poem !
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Old 05-14-2006   #5 (permalink)
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i love your poem
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Old 05-15-2006   #6 (permalink)
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love it!!!
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Old 05-15-2006   #7 (permalink)
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wow. i like that.
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Old 06-20-2006   #8 (permalink)
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that was good
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Old 06-21-2006   #9 (permalink)
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That's beautiful.
Can I hire you as a lyricist for my band?
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Old 07-18-2006   #10 (permalink)
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It totally rhymes and shit
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