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| Discussion starter Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: Austin, Texas
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| (It’s a song, not a poem) Down beneath the apple tree an old squirrel looked down on me “How are you,” it said to me and I knew what would come to me [Chorus:] Seasons come and seasons go raging seas blow to and fro And no one really seems to know what is from within (Repeat) Well I went walking down the street looking for what came to me and I did just stop to see what exactly came for me. [Chorus] (repeat) |
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| Discussion starter Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: Austin, Texas
Posts: 77
| Yea this song is weird but it was how i was feeling... and I want feedback |
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NO TRUE!- Guy behind the counter of 7-11 O... um wats this space for... www.freewebs.com/wisdomcreek If you go there you will make me heart be happy. It is my band! | |
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| Discussion starter Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: Austin, Texas
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| Thanks. My bands kinda disorganized |
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NO TRUE!- Guy behind the counter of 7-11 O... um wats this space for... www.freewebs.com/wisdomcreek If you go there you will make me heart be happy. It is my band! | |
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