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Old 01-31-2006   #1 (permalink)
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Default My poems (this is the only one that i ever wrote that is kind of depressing)

I AM


I am a person of strength,
Dignity,
And pride.
I am a person of love,
Sympathy,
And passion.
At least that's what i am on the outside,
But on the inside,
I am a person of weakness,
Un-worthiness,
And self-doubting.
I am a person of hate,
hurt,
And aloneness.
I am a person of depression,
Anguish,
And problems.
A person that doesn't see life after death,
That doesn't look on the bright side of things,
And doesn't make the right choices
EVER.
A person of many secrets
And bad memories.
A person that needs to be hugged,
Appreciated,
And recognized once in a while.
So the next itme you see me around
Don't be afraid to say hi
Because you don't know how much longer i'll be around.
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Old 02-01-2006   #2 (permalink)
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Ok can I say this atleast. You know how many people feel the same way you do, yet still go on. On the other had great expression of your feelings. Loved the poem. You should write more often. But if you really and truly can't get out of the loss of depression, please seek professional help. Tell a friend, teacher, family member, mentor or medical professional.
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Old 03-03-2006   #3 (permalink)
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Ur poem rox, and trust me I've been there, and Im still there. Hang on, so I can see more of your awesome poems get published one day.
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great self expression, just keep on going it will be easier.
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Old 03-04-2006   #5 (permalink)
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Great poem.
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