A place once thought to be a prison
Now a place where my heart belongs
One so sweet that you can’t help but feel lust
Look upon the moon at the same time as I
See what I see as I look up to the night sky
Drink in the smells of everything around us
Forget any cares and just be with me this once
Soft breath sends shivers down my spine
Kisses on my neck a feeling so divine
Wrap me in your arms and know that I am yours
Skin against skin a need growing within
Heat raging through my body
As a light breeze wisps by us
Cool grass on the souls of my feet
But nothing helps as I grow weak in the knees
Now laying down with you on top of me
A sweet erotica of lust and love
Deep throat to make sure you feel the same
Suddenly the need becoming too much
Teasing me as I teased you
I beg that you let me take you inside
Moaning in pleasure and pain
Meeting every thrust dead on
I wonder how this could ever be wrong
Flipping us over I ride you on and on
Until the universe explodes and I lie there shaking
Wanting this to never end
When it does you kiss my neck
We both lie there trying to catch our breaths
Falling asleep in each others arms under the stars
Watching the sunrise and knowing that it all has to end
Passion in the air as we kiss one last time
A breeze blows by as we dress and say goodbye
Knowing that this will happen again the next night

I thought it was good, it climaxed(sorry about the pun)
like the tittle Oklahoma one OU rocks my socks

I like it. It took my breath!

Nice, I liked it, better than any of my poems.