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Old 12-23-2004   #1 (permalink)
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Default child without hope

it's what you were raised with
it's what you know
the angels are drunken
the stars hidden beyond the neon glow

no white light to bring you home
a tiny infant born into a world unknown
your mother goes back to a world of coke
your father is hooked on a broken note

bets are made as to where you'll end up
the worlds next serial killer
or a child that disappears into the thunder
of the screaming in the apartment below

high hopes for you will never be great
to overcome such a terrible fate
a child in the womb not even breathing air
will be born into her parents chilling war
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That poem is really interesting. I think you did a really good job hun. Keep up the good work.
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thank you andrea dear. it's for my cousin's baby. due in june. cause it's pretty much what's gonna happen unless someone intervines.
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I'm really sorry to hear that hun.

/me wishes she could help.
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