I Feel- Dead

Sangria · 08-10-2004

I'm trapped in the darkness,
cradling my bleeding heart in my frozen cold hands.
Listening to the storm inside my stone walls,
searching for the woman hidden beneath the lifeless body.
No movement nor noise.
Silence.
A chilling shriek exploding from the soul.
Deafening the surroundings.
Echoing for miles.
You don't even know.
I can't be heard.
I'm dead.
But I breathe your air.
I'm here.
And you don't even know.
I'm here.
And you don't care.
I'm here.
Lost, forgotten, worthless, ineffectual, inutile.
Just a girl.
Battling with fears.
Fighting...
Alone.

Mz.Gray · 08-14-2004

ooo. that was very deep. and interesting. it's nice. good work!

oh_trouble · 08-14-2004

i <3 it

babydoll · 08-29-2004

that was really good christi..very deep

midnight · 09-30-2004

THAT WAS AN AWSOME POEM

08-10-2004	#1 (permalink)
Sangria Just getting started Join Date: Aug 2004 Posts: 11	I Feel- Dead I'm trapped in the darkness, cradling my bleeding heart in my frozen cold hands. Listening to the storm inside my stone walls, searching for the woman hidden beneath the lifeless body. No movement nor noise. Silence. A chilling shriek exploding from the soul. Deafening the surroundings. Echoing for miles. You don't even know. I can't be heard. I'm dead. But I breathe your air. I'm here. And you don't even know. I'm here. And you don't care. I'm here. Lost, forgotten, worthless, ineffectual, inutile. Just a girl. Battling with fears. Fighting... Alone.

08-14-2004	#2 (permalink)
Mz.Gray Be gentle, newcomer Join Date: Aug 2004 Posts: 3	RE: I Feel- Dead ooo. that was very deep. and interesting. it's nice. good work!
Mz.Gray Be gentle, newcomer Join Date: Aug 2004 Posts: 3

08-14-2004	#3 (permalink)
oh_trouble Discussion starter Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: My House? Posts: 92	RE: I Feel- Dead i <3 it

08-29-2004	#4 (permalink)
babydoll Just getting started Join Date: Aug 2004 Posts: 7	RE: I Feel- Dead that was really good christi..very deep

09-30-2004	#5 (permalink)
midnight Commentator Join Date: Aug 2004 Posts: 49	RE: I Feel- Dead THAT WAS AN AWSOME POEM
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