I wanna start a fanfic

04xDEex26 · 09-24-2006

I wanna start a fanfic I've never done one before. Tell me if this little part I just wrote is any good.

Sorry. Is that all he can say? Does he not realize how I feel. I feel betrayed and disappinted that he would do that. How could he give all them girls bracelets? I feel so dirty. Now I have a social diease and all he can say is sorry Lexi. Sorry Lexi my azz. I don't care what Jay has to say to me or any of his lies. How could I been so stupid for beleiving that he was commited to me. He always told me he would never hurt me. He was my protector. I can't beleive he did this to me. After all of the crap he has putten me through I can't beleive I still love Jason Hogart.

hp_47 · 09-24-2006

it's pretty good but the part about her loving jay....... ew

04xDEex26 · 09-24-2006

I know, but I want to do something on Alex's peersciptive after secrets

Sean&EmmaForever · 11-08-2006

That Would Be So Cute!

beachbabi28 · 11-12-2006

that is cute!

pinceau29 · 11-17-2006

Nice I love it.

jbuz7546 · 11-21-2006

awesome idea

pony_gurl · 11-29-2006

its cute but that doesnt really sound like alex

09-24-2006	#1 (permalink)
04xDEex26 Eligible for a custom title Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: PA Posts: 191	I wanna start a fanfic I wanna start a fanfic I've never done one before. Tell me if this little part I just wrote is any good. Sorry. Is that all he can say? Does he not realize how I feel. I feel betrayed and disappinted that he would do that. How could he give all them girls bracelets? I feel so dirty. Now I have a social diease and all he can say is sorry Lexi. Sorry Lexi my azz. I don't care what Jay has to say to me or any of his lies. How could I been so stupid for beleiving that he was commited to me. He always told me he would never hurt me. He was my protector. I can't beleive he did this to me. After all of the crap he has putten me through I can't beleive I still love Jason Hogart.

09-24-2006	#2 (permalink)
hp_47 Just getting started Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 13	it's pretty good but the part about her loving jay....... ew
hp_47 Just getting started Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 13

09-24-2006	#3 (permalink)
04xDEex26 Eligible for a custom title Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: PA Posts: 191	I know, but I want to do something on Alex's peersciptive after secrets

11-08-2006	#4 (permalink)
Sean&EmmaForever Discussion starter Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: Washington Posts: 69	That Would Be So Cute!

11-12-2006	#5 (permalink)
beachbabi28 Interested participant Join Date: Nov 2006 Posts: 19	that is cute!

11-17-2006	#6 (permalink)
pinceau29 Interested participant Join Date: Oct 2006 Posts: 18	Nice I love it.

11-21-2006	#7 (permalink)
jbuz7546 Be gentle, newcomer Join Date: Nov 2006 Posts: 4	awesome idea

11-29-2006	#8 (permalink)
pony_gurl Just getting started Join Date: Nov 2006 Posts: 8	its cute but that doesnt really sound like alex