Words

"sticks and stones may break my bones, but words will never hurt me"
bullshit
words hurt more that bricks or sticks
words are there forever
they tear at you
eat you inside and out
it makes you want to scream
and it makes you want to shout
the scars they cause are visiable
but not in your apperance.
the scars they cause are worse thatn that
they make you feel inferior
then sometime down the lie
when you think your doing just fine
you find a trigger
that causes you to remember
all the horriable things from your life
then your crisis gets bigger
as you reach for a knife
its the only way you know
to deal with the pain
you'll be happy again
once you open a vein
and as you lie on the floor
bleeding once more
you see the scars on your wrist
that only exsist because of words
thatb supposivly don't hurt.

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