Boredom won.. I'm making another

Reading these posts, you consider it lame
But u figure for laughs u'd join the game
You start to type and u lose control
With each rhyme u lose a little more soul
Emotions pour out and into the rhyme
As u type you lose your sense of time
Clear your mind and let the rhymes flow
As you type time seems to slow
You read what you write, it all seems surreal
You need a few moments for your scars to re-heal
Your shaking, its over, but u only want more
Thats how it works here, welcome to a Rap War

that was bad... thats what I get for staying up till like 1 in the morning